thats the craziest one i've ever seen

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I like the concept, and the execution isn't bad, just a tad sloppy. Keep working at it though. You will get there.

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DUG

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Thank you. I really appericate the criticism.

I'll start working on it some more.

Like the zipper needs work.
Thank you once again.

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Your sounding like a necrophiliac....
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Well to break it down into a little detail, this is what stood out for me.

1) The zipper on the left seems to end a little un-naturally, if that makes any sense. I think it would be alright to end right there, just with an end like on a regular zipper, or move it up over the shoulder like the one on the right, either or, but I like adding the little stopper thing more.

2) the muscle under the skin looks like plastic. perhaps loose a little shine, add a little texture?

That was all.

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DUG

"All I want in lifes, a little bit of love to take the pain away."
-Spiritualized - "Ladies and Gentlemen We are Floating in Space"

I agree on the zipper part.

The muscle I'll have to work on a lot

Thanks for the tips though.

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HeartthedeadHeartthedeadHeartthedead.
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Your sounding like a necrophiliac....
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Not a problem at all

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DUG

"All I want in lifes, a little bit of love to take the pain away."
-Spiritualized - "Ladies and Gentlemen We are Floating in Space"